Rare stone from Egypt.

 Egypt, a country known for its pyramids, for its mummies, a desert area. It's a story of many hundreds years back when people used to trade with other countries and also the smuggling got on its rise. And they smuggled diamonds, the hardest metal available on earth. 

One boy, who used to live with his uncle amd aunt thought of living on his own, from now and he had a herd of sheep. So he started to travel with them, and started to earn money by doing many works. 

He once visited the country of Egypt, he also fell awestruck with the beauty he saw there but not only this, he also found his love in that country. The girl was so fond of his country and this is what attracted the boy more towards her. They somehow started to talk and got to know more about each other and the girl also started to feel the same for the boy.

Within these times he heard about the stories of smuggled diamonds and a rare stone which Egypt had and the good omens that worked with the theories of the rare stone (Omens- Signs). They have lost the stone because of the plunder of goons in the area.

The people have faith in omens but were not courageous enough to take any decision to fight against those goons. Then the boy came ahead after understanding the whole situation, to become a leader for these people and the girl he loved also wanted that.

So, he left with those men and left his love there in the country saying for their love that, "Dunes might change, but the desert never changes".

He went with others and had a horrendous fight with the goons and after defeating he ultimately met with their leader, who liked this boy and asked questions related to life's philosophies, which the boy answered in a fabulous manner. The leader of goons gifted the boy the rare stone, saying may you always followed by good omens.

They happily came back to their country and got to know that the rare stone was their ultimate way of solving all problems. People brought safety to their country by defeating the goons, got a leader, by having the rare stone the good Omen always followed them. And at the end the boy went to the girl, to his love and said, we will always be that desert.

Comments

  1. Up to the rubric parameters
    as per your topic the stone didn't plays a major role in your story. But overall you maintain the flow. 👏👏

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  2. I agree with Dipank you share all the things very clearly

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  3. Your thinking is very creative you will maintain your word limit also . just need to work on some spelling errors overall story was nice.

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  4. Well done, it's very creative story, inciting incident , rising action, was there , climax could be better overall it is a fantastic story with good resolution.

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